I like this idea, but I’m honestly not sure how much time I could commit to this. (I also do a ton of paid editing work and this is supposed to be more of a fun sandbox area for me.) I might be able to give something a quick once-over to say something like “your paragraphs are too long” or “there’s too much denouncement after the haircut” but I’m not sure this wouldn’t just create more of a burden on the site’s stronger writers.